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Blackbird

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Her wings stretch wide, her feathers gleam
And off her perch she flies
Into the sky as if in a dream
As tears escape her eyes.

Blackbird cries out one last time
For help, or maybe warning.
No one cares, and they don't know
She won't be there in the mourning.

Over blackened hills and waters
She continues her ascent.
Through grey, dead clouds, she knows deep down
They don't know that she's gone yet.

She feels weak, her wings give out,
And to the ground she falls.
A bright light shimmers like the sun
As frantically she calls.

Someone tries to catch her
But he is just too late.
When he finds her on the ground,
She's already met her fate.

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randomchick Creativity - Poem published by 1 year ago ()

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Amazing. Gave me chills. <3

Amazing. Gave me chills.

<3

~Drink the poison when you think it's over. . . Stab yourself when you think it's too late.~

Thanx

Ahhh thanks!

It gave me chills to re read this, about a year later...

I was so disturbed, and I think a part of me still is.

I'm not like this, I can't keep on like this.

Beautiful

Beautiful just beautiful

thank you so much. i

thank you so much.
i appreciate your input, and its very good to know that someone cares

I'm not like this, I can't keep on like this.

Anonymous (not verified)

this is a beautiful metaphor

this is a beautiful metaphor and wonderfully written
i completely get it
<3

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