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Ok. Pretty sure this is my first time posting a poem on here. Although I write often. So....uh, be honest. I just thought this up, and it's a VERY rough draft. :) Thankkks.

I am falling

Screaming
Crying out.
Lying
Pretending
Hiding myself.
I am so
Confused
Depressed
And
Out of sorts.
I want to
Stay strong
Stand up
Just walk away.
For
You
And me
And the world
To see.
But I can't
Control
Feel
Think straight
Anymore.
I wish it would
End
Go away
Just
Leave me alone.
I'll
Breathe
Let go
Forget
Those painful words.
Fake a
Smile
Lie
And avoid your
Eyes. 
I don't know
Who I am
What I am
Why I am
This way.
Am I 
Strong
Willing
Able to stand?
I 
Hope
Pray
Keep faith 
In this.
In you.
In God.
That 
In the
End
It'll all
Be ok.
Work out.
The way it's
Supposed to.
And I can see
The
Light
Once 
Again.
 
OH!!! PS- I know my writing strategy is pretty weird, but thats how I write poems so, uh, deal with it. Lol :)
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Lyssa Creativity - Poem published by 1 year ago ()

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Lyssa Lyssa

Tehe.

1 year () (Permalink)

Awh!! :) Thank you both of you. I'm so happy you like it. And oneloneflower I completely understand.....thats how I think too! :) Glad you liked it.

Guess I'd rather hurt then feel nothing at all. <3

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oneloneflower oneloneflower

I actually like your writing

1 year () (Permalink)

I actually like your writing style, it reminds me of the way I think, if that makes any sense, which I probably doesn't. Oh well. I really liked your poem though! I understand how you feel(especially about the lying and pretending parts, I feel like I do that all the time now.)

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Anonymous (not verified)

very lovely, perhaps my

1 year () (Permalink)

very lovely, perhaps my favorite of all of them because of the simplicity,

Bravo!!

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