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Last Note (Might be Triggering)

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You walked away,
I wispered stay.
You smiled broad,
So I could think it's "okey",
But you failed that,
Cause I could see the tear underneth your hat.

Why did you go?
Please come back....
How could you leave?
And not even look back?
Please I miss you.

I told you my secret,
You said you would keep it.
But then you ran away,
after I begged you to stay.
You told everyone I knew,
So know they know my secret too.

Did you leave because you saw my cuts?
Did you leave because I was bad luck?
Why did you want her?
I see you walking in the street with her,
Looking happy, even saying you love her.

This will be my last note,
I gave it my my best tried to stand tall.
It's written in a special code,
so no one really see it all.

My last note, is to say good-bye,
wish you the best and a wave of good-luck
You think it's easy, you think I'm fine.
You think I'm use to saying "Good-Bye"
Well I'm not......
But this will be my "Good - Bye"........
It will all end tonight.
I even wrote your name on the knive,
So everyone will know, I thought of you the night I died.
 

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almost20 Creativity - Poem published by 6 months ago ()

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thanks you guys, i will have

thanks you guys, i will have to start writing again i havent written since last year. you guys dont know what  you comments means to me thanks alot.

this is an amazing poem...so

this is an amazing poem...so I guess I'm not the onlyone who has a name carved into their skin

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wow this is very trigereriing but its a excellent poem

 

hi my name is peter ive been a cutter and ive been picing at my scabs for  5 years now  but im trying to stop my outlet is listing to music just message me if you want to chat

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