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Tidal Wave
..Breathing in water...
Flashbacks come to life
Deep underwater
[I love you, Michelle]
I'm proud you are my daughter
My heart shuts down
Miles deep
Inches to the ground
Hitting the sand
Next I heard
A memorial band
Tear-covered faces
Grasped hands
A grieved mother paces
The reverend stands
[May 20, 2009]
"She committed suicide,
Her heart shut down.
Washed up on Daytona Beach,
She had drowned."
Someway, somehow
Hearing just one more sound
[I am dead underwater]
"I love you, Michelle
I'm proud you were my daughter."

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:) <3;
2 years () (Permalink)This is so creative, i really love it.
I've written a song about a girl who jumps from a bridge, its pretty much like this,
i love what you've written, well done ^_^
xxx
Everything you say to me;
Takes me one step closer to the edge -
And I'm about to break.
I need a little room to breathe;
'Cause I'm one step closer to the edge -
I'm about to break.
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